ext_100836 ([identity profile] mingsmommy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] magdalyna 2009-09-25 01:28 pm (UTC)

Oh. This was wonderful. It has a lovely hesitant feel to it.

This line in particular:

Her therapist has her read Of Mice and Men, after she’s detoxed enough to concentrate. She cries, getting tears and snot all over the last few pages.


Very well written, wonderful tone. Great work.

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